The women's sister age 33 (name not found) stated that the women would complain about having stomach pain for over a year after she would have dinner. Then one day the women came home from work with a simple cold. She lasted three days with a high fever and a cold. Before her husband took her to the hospital. When they got to the hospital the women was attended by a doctor and asked some questions. The doctor did tests on her. Then when the results came out the women was shocked. She was told that she had metastatic cancer. The doctor told her that the cancer had first evolved in her stomach. The doctors did chemotherapy on her to try to save her life. But the cancer was to advanced that there wasn't any hope left. Even though the doctors did all they could to save her life. She sadly died within the five days she found out she had cancer.
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ReplyDeleteIn paragraph 1 the last sentence you put five instead of fifth. In the second paragraph you keep on putting her husband and the age of 35 but you can should say it once because we now know how old he is and then you should just say her husband. The second paragraph is like the first paragraph the only difference there is, is that it had more detail about the side affects which u can add in paragraph 1.
DeleteWhy didn't they go to the doctors when she started to feel terrible. If they would have went asap she might have been able to live. Do you think the same.