Friday, October 28, 2016

News Story

On Saturday October 22, 2016 in Berwyn IL, a story about a woman who died five days after she found out she had metastatic cancer was revealed. A women around her 30s started out with a simple cold after coming home from work. The women lasted three days with high fever. Before her husband around age 35 decided to take her to the hospital. The doctors attended the women and did tests on her. Later that day the results came out saying she had metastatic cancer. Metastatic cancer is when the cancer is at stage five. This stage means that the cancer has spread to other organs or parts of the body.The doctors tried to treat the cancer by doing chemotherapy on the women but she passed away on the fifth days.

The women's sister age 33 (name not found) stated that the women would complain about having stomach pain for over a year after she would have dinner. Then one day the women came home from work with a simple cold. She lasted three days with a high fever and a cold. Before her husband took her to the hospital. When they got to the hospital the women was attended by a doctor and asked some questions. The doctor did tests on her. Then when the results came out the women was shocked. She was told that she had metastatic cancer. The doctor told her that the cancer had first evolved in her stomach. The doctors did chemotherapy on her to try to save her life. But the cancer was to advanced that there wasn't any hope left. Even though the doctors did all they could to save her life. She sadly died within the five days she found out she had cancer.


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    1. In paragraph 1 the last sentence you put five instead of fifth. In the second paragraph you keep on putting her husband and the age of 35 but you can should say it once because we now know how old he is and then you should just say her husband. The second paragraph is like the first paragraph the only difference there is, is that it had more detail about the side affects which u can add in paragraph 1.

      Why didn't they go to the doctors when she started to feel terrible. If they would have went asap she might have been able to live. Do you think the same.

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